Part 2
(MEET THE # 1 FAN GIRL)
"Good, I'm glad you have eyes." You said trying to get away. You knock him out of your way and run to the end of the roof, you trip a little, Naruto looks up in concern. You catch yourself and jump to the other roof and you keep running on.
"Wow, shes fast." Said Sakura.
"Ahhh!" yelled Naruto turning around in fright.
"Oh, Naruto your such a loser, chasing after the new girl like that." She said closing her eyes and shaking her head.
"Sakura?" He said looking at her from the ground.
"Yeah, what do you want, Naruto?" she ask not really giving a care.
"She sat next to Sasuke." He said giggling a bit.
"SHE WHAT!?!?!" she yelled, she shook her head in anger. After that she ran off ,even faster than you, to go find you. You slow down a bit but right before you slowly jump down from the roof (for there was a shop you wanted to go to). Sakura jumps in front of you, poking you in the middle of your chest and backing you up. "What do you think you were doing in class today?" she yelled still poking you.
You take a dig breath, it seemed that everyone wanted you to stop what you were doing and talk to them. "Learning, What else do you do in class?" you said pushing her away.
"No, who do you think you were sitting next to? Smart @$$!" she yelled but just standing there with an evil look on her face.
"Oh your one of those Sasuke fan girls, right?" you asked with an evil smile on your face.
"Um.... oh... well..." She mumbled.
"I see, so you are. I had a bunch of girls just like you trying to fight me for that seat" you told her, "I don't see whats so special about Sasuke." You said to yourself looking up into the sky with your finger on your cheek.
"You don't know!?!" she yelled.
"Nope." you said shacking your head.
"Well, you even dumber then I thought." She said looking up with an evil grin.
"HEY, HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO KNOW WHO YOU DREAM ABOUT AT NIGHT!?!?!?!" you said leaning towards her
"I DO'NT DREAM ABOUT HIM!" she yells in you face.
"Oh please, don't even try covering it up." You said stepping back and grinning.
"Well, so what if I do. It's not like he'll ever fall in love with you or anything!" she said.
"Maybe that's true." You said calmly. "But then again, I don't really care." Sasuke walked up the side of the roof. He looks up at you and Sakura over the ledge.
*Oh great, another fan girl* he said to himself.
"You mean you don't?" she said with her eyes wide open.
"That's right" you said closeting you eyes and smiling. "I couldn't care less about what Sasuke thinks about me!" you said. Sasuke looks up with a surprised look on his face.
"She... she what?" he said. You hear him and walk over to the side of the roof. You bend your knees a bit and look over the side to find Sasuke. Your eyes widen
"S-Sasuke?" you muddered. He just looks at you with his normal face. You look to your left a bit so it doesn't look like you were looking at him.
"I'm.... I.... Um..." you muddier again.
Sakura walks over to the side of the roof next to you, noticing Sasuke. "Oh, Sasuke." She said smiling from ear to ear. "How are you today? I hope you did well in school."
You look over at her "suck up!" you said calmly.
"Whatever, loser!" he said.
You lower your eyes I bit, getting a little ticked off. You quickly jump off from the roof taking Sasuke down to the ground with you. "You think your all that don't you?" you said with your face in his, pushing him backwards.
He stays silent, looking at you in surprise.
"You think just because you're the most loved boy in class, that gives you the right to treat everyone else like crap!" you yell still pushing him walk.
"You don't know anything about me!" he yells stopping you in your tracks.
"Sen, stop bothering Sasuke!" Sakura yells. You stop looking at Sasuke and draw your attention to Sakura. You jump up in front of her and she falls over in the excitement.
"And you." you said. "You think you're the only girl who can ever look at, talk to, or touch SASUKE!" you yell sticking your face in hers. After a little bit of time has passed you calm down and hop back on the roof.
Suddenly Naruto runs up and grabs you, making you and him fall off the roof. "Haha, I have you now." He said giggling a bit.
You do a half flip leavening Naruto on the bottom, his back facing the ground.
"Not quite!" you said. BoOoOoOOOOoooMmMm!!!!! Naruto and you crash to the ground. You pick yourself up, leaving Naruto on the floor. You turn to him. "Hmm. Whats wrong with you?" you ask.
"Ehhh." He says.
"Oh, he's knocked out." You said.
"You knocked him out?" asked Sakura!
"Well, I'm done here. I'm going home!" you said. Sasuke and Sakura look at you, waiting for you to come back. You keep walking like you really don't care about what you did to Naruto.
"Your just going to leave him there?!?!" Sakura yells.
"Yep." You said walking away throwing your arm in the air like you were waving goodbye.
"What am I supposed to do with him?" she yells out in worriment.
"Pick'em up and take him to your house or something." You said bringing your arm back down to the side of your body. Sasuke watches you leave.
"Sasuke what are we supposed to do?" she asked sitting on the edge of the roof.
"What do you mean we?" he asked "he's your problem now." He said walking off towards you. Sakura just stands there with her mouth hanging open. She walks up to Naruto and grabs him getting ready to pick him up, but right when she touched him, PPOOOOOFFF Naruto turned into a log.
"So, it wasn't Naruto after all." She said.
Sasuke walks up to you and grunts impressively. You just look away for a minute or two. Naruto comes running in the middle of you two breaking you two apart.
"HEY!" you yell not knowing it was Naruto, "hey, its you." you said calming down.
"Yep, you thought you had me didn't you?" he said acting like he was all that.
"Naruto." Said Sasuke stepping in to the fight.
"What?" he asked Sasuke but still looking at you.
"Leave her alone." said Sasuke stepping forward.
"Oh, so now you have a girlfriend?" asked Naruto raising one of his eyebrows.
"NO!!! NO!!!" yelled Sasuke and you at the same time blowing Naruto away.
"Ok, ok, I get it." He said looking away. You look at Sasuke a bit and once you notice he's about to look your way you quickly look back and blush a little.
"Naruto, whats wrong?" you ask after a little silence. Naruto looked at you with an evil glare. Your eyes widen when Naruto jumps in front of you in his fighting stance. Sasuke tries to get in his way but he was to late, Naruto trys to throw a punch, you move you head a bit so he misses. After that you move you feet under his chest and push him off of you. He flips, landing on his feet and runs after you again. You step in to fighting stands when suddenly you feel someone grad you holding you from behind, you look to see who it is and notice it's one of Naruto's shadow clones. You quickly turn grabbing the clone's arm and you swing the clone at Naruto as he's running after you and suddenly POOOFF the shadow clone disappears and Naruto goes flying. The smoke is everywhere, you can't see a thing.
"Sen, Sen where are you" asked a voice.
"Sasuke?" you ask yourself. You grab something not knowing what it was; you pull it towards you and felt it a little. You notice it's one of Naruto's shadow clones. You throw a punch and hit him. After this the smoke was gone. Naruto lies there at your feet. "Is it really him?" you asked yourself.
"One way to find out." Said Sasuke. You paused for a minute.
"Hey! Why didn't you help me?" you asked yelling in Sasuke's face.
"You didn't need it." He said.
"Well." You muddered. You blushed a little then punch down at Naruto. No smoke came up. "Its Naruto alright. you said smiling.
"Yep" said Sasuke. You walk over to Sasuke and look at him. He blushes a bit and widens his eyes.
"I... I... Lo...." You muddered. He blushes even more, his face starts turning a dark red. You start closing your eyes and smiling, then you start laughing. You turn around and start walking the other way. He notices your leaving and runs after you.
"HEY, HEY!" he yelled. He grabbed you by the arm. "What were you going to say?" he asked still blushing a little bit. You eyes widen, you didn't think he cared.
"Um.. Well, nothing." You look away so you don't have to look at him. You get out of his grasp and run away.
"HEY!?!" you hear in the background. You stop at a store. You see a clock. You look at it noticing it says its 5:43 pm, "OMG, I need to get home and feed Karitaka!" you run as fast as you could pushing people out of your way.
At last you're at your house. You walk inside. "Karitaka?" you yell trying to find him. "Karitaka, where are you?" you asked. You walk into your little room and notice Karitaka ,lying on the floor, dead. You rush over to Karitaka's body. "Karitaka, I'm sorry I didn't think... I wasn't thinking!" you yelled crying your eyes out.
After about 5 minutes of crying, you pick up your cat's body and walk outside. You grab a towel that was lying on the ground and rap your poor little kitty in it. Once your done, you walk north towards the woods. Your looking down at you cat, no longer having tears in your eyes. BAM!.. You run into someone or something, you fall crashing on the ground, your poor kitty falls as well. Once you look up (getting ready to yell at the idiot who knocked you over) "HEY!!! WHAT DO YOU-" you stopped talking for a minuet to try and see who this girl was.
"Hey, watch it punk!" yelled out the voice.
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